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Burning Love Draft 3 January 31, 2010

Filed under: Reading Response — AmiRizo @ 9:50 PM

The third draft has developed some more. She came up with two new crots about a friend named Matt and a trial with a stalker named David. The theme of her paper becomes more pronounced. Things are starting to connect and tie together. One thing I really like about her writing is that she is very clear-cut. She writes straight to the point. However, there are still some missing descriptions in some


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