Wow, this really was a shitty first draft. When I read Stefani Mead’s draft for the first time, I had no idea where the story line was going. The purpose of each paragraph seems to not make any sense or follow a chronological frame. There were a lot of excessive words repetitive phrases, and grammatical errors. I would probably be extremely self-conscience turning a draft like this in or having someone read it. For all of my papers, I have tried to perfect the first draft and write everything complete. However, that just limits the potential of my papers. Stefani’s draft shows the sole purpose of writing a first draft, which is to get everything and anything out. If an idea pops into your mind, just write it out. Get it onto paper.
Love Burns-Draft 1 January 16, 2010